A new comedy short from Vampire soup

Uh ... ok. That was stupid crazy! (That's a good thing.) Nice writing. "I would kill for you so hard." "I touch myself ..." Overblown routine scenario with funny quips here and there. I like it. I like it. Only one question though. I don't get the high-5 at the end. That threw me off.
 
This one had me smiling the whole time. Great job man. The acting was good overall, dialogue sounded pretty clear, good stuff.

-They get everyone's liver sooner or later...lol.
 
Yeah. It wasnt that bad I guess. Thanks for the feedback! I need a dop. Someday I'll get one. Someday.
 
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vampiresoup - by now it's blatantly obvious that you are a deeply disturbed individual with a warped sense of humor. keep up the good work!
 
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