New comedy short that I made.

That's pretty funny. I like the fact that "maybe I will..." is a damn funny line on it's own.

Reminded me of a sculpture by Charles Ray called "Oh, Charley, Charley, Charley..." Same concept. I won't post a link because it is very adult oriented.
 
I think it was pretty awesome, actually. If you've seen my movie, you know I am no stranger to bad taste. Your idea was fantastic.

I think the only thing I would criticize, is it felt too long. When I started writing this, I was going to say, cut it down to 5 min and it would knock my socks off. Then I saw that it was like 3:43, and I was like D'oh! So I think if you took some of the air out of some scenes, like where they are actually shooting the porn, it would have floored me, rather than getting chuckles out of me. That may just be my personal taste though.

Nice work. And the green screen work was spectacular as well!!! I love it when people use green screen for comedy!
 
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hahah, the Harvey Weinstein dialogue is awesome.

I, just...wow. haha, this was definately one of the most unique shorts I've seen on here. Bad taste? Probably. enjoyable? Oh yes. :)
 
i can't help but think this is the product of someone saying the phrase: "go fook yourself", and then someone just thought about it way too much...

kinda like if you write a word over and over and it starts to look like its spelled wrong...
 
:grin: loved the Harvey VO!

that is a pretty wack idea.. to bad you didn't have it on time for the scifest.
 
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And the green screen work was spectacular as well!!! I love it when people use green screen for comedy!
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It wasn't green screen! Thanks so much for the input, everybody. I'm really glad I could get a laugh out of you guys. I've got some more stuff on my site if you wanna check it out, most of it is not nearly that disturbing...thanks again!

ZombieSquid Productions
 
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ZombieSquid said:
It wasn't green screen! Thanks so much for the input, everybody. I'm really glad I could get a laugh out of you guys. I've got some more stuff on my site if you wanna check it out, most of it is not nearly that disturbing...thanks again!

ZombieSquid Productions
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****, are you telling me you shot yourself in all of those positions in the same room? Then just overlaid? Do tell.

M

Edited to say: I typed **** and the board turned it into poo poo...uh...okay.
 
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