What do you think of design?

Looks better.

The heading needs to be brightened, as mentioned, and you should space your paragraphs a bit.

Try out some other fonts if you get a chance.
 
Looks nice. But I would resize the logos at the bottom. They almost dominate the entire page, which is not good. Make them smaller by at least 50%.

Other than that it looks great.
 
I didn't mind the logos. They could be made a bit smaller, but they do blend into image as it is.

The Welcome message should be spell checked (space between welcome and to) and needs to be bigger to balance logos (if you don't make them smaller) and heading.

You may want to move or eliminate the Photo - Video - Etc part since it sits right above the links which say exact same thing.
 
The welcome message feels repetitive (use of "we" a lot, two instances of "aim" close together, etc.,) and reads kind of stilted, IMO.

Just a couple of suggestions (not that I'm word wizard by any stretch).

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