Wedding Intro (wip)

Nice job.

Only thing...I wasnt keen about the little "jump blur" effect.

Assume the wooden door means something to the client?
 
Nice job.

Only thing...I wasnt keen about the little "jump blur" effect.

Assume the wooden door means something to the client?


yeah wooden door is like a "barn/farm" type feel which they wanted lol. I plan to add some more like camera actually zooming in out and maybe some more gfx elements.

So the jump blur didn't work for you huh? I've gotten mixed feedback most seem to like but some certainly don't. Not sure if I will leave it in especially after I add the other updates.

thanks for the feedback!
 
Add me in as one that didn't care for the jump blur effect, but everything else I thought was GREAT! :) I do agree with the above post about adding at least a couple 3D photos to the mix would really look cool.
 
I wasn't a fan of the jump blur, it looked - off

And the wiggler on the camera was strange too. Maybe a more subtle movement?
 
thanks for the tips guys I actually like the wiggle on the camera maybe a little fine tunning though. I'm thinking I will remove the jump blur as well.

Appreciate the critique!

By the way my cousin lives in Ithaca, New York.
 
thanks for the tips guys I actually like the wiggle on the camera maybe a little fine tunning though. I'm thinking I will remove the jump blur as well.

Appreciate the critique!

By the way my cousin lives in Ithaca, New York.

I'm not a fan of the shaky cam... Now, if the wedding video footgage itself is shaky, I'd put the footage in black and white, add some 'film' grain effect, and make it like a war correspondent footage... but then you'd have to have done weddings to get the joke...

But for your 'wall of stills, that come alive', I didn't care for the camera jiggle.

On the 'blur' item. I think a longer 'blur', rather than something that 'reads' as a goof...
 
I really like the overall concept of this. The movement around the board was timed well. Nice mix of still and video.
 
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