Website look

Good site so far! I like the use of colors and fonts.
However, I have 4 minor critiques:
1. The dark shadow on the dark-color title can make the title hard to read.
2. In the 1st paragraph, 'others' should be 'other'.
3. Instead of opening with "Thank you for inquiring...", you could open with something like "Welcome to the home of Bengal Productions...", or something like that.
4. The links on the nav bar need to be re-ordered. It would flow better if "Filmography" was next to "Photos", and if "About Us" was next to "Home" or "Contact Us".

Just my $.02!
 
Aroon_Narayanan said:
Good site so far! I like the use of colors and fonts.
However, I have 4 minor critiques:
1. The dark shadow on the dark-color title can make the title hard to read.
2. In the 1st paragraph, 'others' should be 'other'.
3. Instead of opening with "Thank you for inquiring...", you could open with something like "Welcome to the home of Bengal Productions...", or something like that.
4. The links on the nav bar need to be re-ordered. It would flow better if "Filmography" was next to "Photos", and if "About Us" was next to "Home" or "Contact Us".

Just my $.02!
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Wow, that was fast. Nice critiques. Drop shadow too dark, got it.

I was playing with the nav buttons and couldn't figure out what flowed well. I like your ideas.
 
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