Watch and critique my first short film

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Damien_TOrrence

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It's called Shut In, it's nearly 15 minutes long, it's my first film, I know it's flawed personally and it's not the greatest thing ever but I'm still really proud of how this one came out.

I want to do more shorts in the near future, and the more honest criticisms of the film the more I'll know where to improve, so please feel free to critique any and all aspects of this film it will only help me in the future, I posted a rough edit of the film not too long ago and your advice and critiques really helped me fix a few issues I had in there before this cut so I know you guys are helpful. Thanks in advance.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Gq-kwjyd1Fg
 
Congratz on finishing your first film!

I'm sure you know what you did wrong, but that's how we learn.
I ask you to think about the edit (could be much tighter), lighting (this takes time and I know it's new to you), composition & framing, exposure, etc...

Just keep making films...they will get better as you go.
 
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