Video edit feedback

[podig]

Hello,
Would love your thoughts/ feedback on the this short sequence I edited.
What are your thoughts? And what (if anything) should I do to make this a better piece? (Please keep criticism constructive)

Note: This would be just one sequence for a fuller length work.

Thanks!

https://vimeo.com/97286082

 

[kwkeirstead]

Great edits! I found the music to be a bit over the voice of the young lady.

 

[stefanhuberfilms]

I find it great! One thing that I find is missing, would be some minimal sounds of the city, the story could benefit from that even more...