Tips and critiquing on this clip?

[daveallen]

http://www.thrashskate.com/movies/Summer06promo.mov

Hey guys, this clip is a promotional for my second indie skateboard dvd coming out in stores after the summer. I use natural lighting, and some critiquing on that and my framing would be great.. clip is only 1:30 and 15 megs. Thanks, and enjoy.

 

[Andrew Brinkhaus]

The requested URL /movies/summer06promo.mov was not found on this server.

try again.

 

[daveallen]

There we go... got the link working. sorry.. it's a weird site with linking. should work fine now.

 

[J.R. Hudson]

That was really nicely done! I enjoyed it !

 

[daveallen]

thankyou.. is there anything i can make better in it besides that audio flaw?

 

[J.R. Hudson]

Any tips I have would be purely subjective I think. It really is well done.

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Some ideas I have for a skate doc would be to stage the skating with a narrative style; using reverses or multiple framing and cuts within a trick

I'd also layer the Audio with additional Foley work and Sound FX (Wind, Cars, Dogs, whatever there may be in the shot of course)

Anyways; great job!

 

[maverickstunts]

That was very well done. I enjoyed it as well.

 

[Lake Films]

Yes, very nice looking clip. Interesting. Was it CC'd? If not, what settings did you use to get such a 'rich' look?