Timecop - A Short

[pepsidude32]

Here is the first draft of my script:

http://pc.celtx.com/project/Yk3GNP5L7Jvy/view/http://celtx.com/res/XDHqMxtl01xZ

It is about a young man who finds a watch that can freeze time but in the end he gets more than he bargained for. All feedback is greatly appreciated. It's only four pages and is very special effects heavy. I plan on producing it myself but we will have to see how that turns out. Thanks again
http://pc.celtx.com/project/Yk3GNP5L7Jvy/view/http://celtx.com/res/XDHqMxtl01xZ

 

[StefanHaynes]

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[pepsidude32]

Sorry about the takedown. This was due to some feedback i got on a different site. I'm going to post it again.

Changed the name to Frozen in Time

http://pc.celtx.com/project/Yk3GNP5L7Jvy/view/http://celtx.com/res/XDHqMxtl01xZ

Just to let you know -- I do still have some unfinished plans for the script but I would like to see what you guys think of it like this. Thanks for any feedback

 

[mctheory]

nice script
Hope u finish it

 

[pepsidude32]

nice script
Hope u finish it

i appreciate you looking at it. I would like to finish it too :undecided ...i haven't exactly worked out the ending yet but i do have a few ideas. Thanks again