This is the best thing I've shot, and I would like you to critique my cinematography.

Well its difficult for younger folks to make things that push social boundaries, and have the confidence to pull it off well. i thought it was beautful.

Artharman, watch "Tarnation". See what an 11yr old can do with a Video cmaera, its AMAZING.
 
Nice tones and colors. Some nice shots but I didn't really see any amazing compositions. The editing seemed very "art schooly" and I agree with earlier posts: two distinct sequences seemed distracting as the second seems to long and tedious.
 
well being from art school they teach you that you dont need alot of cuts to say something. sometimes you dont need any at all.
 
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