THE WALK OF SHAME :: shot on EX-1

Pretty entertaining. I like the overall setup, but I think you need to work on your pacing a bit. Cut it tighter and tighter and tighter until it can't be cut any tighter, and then cut it once more. :)

Is that LMU?
 
dougspice said:
Pretty entertaining. I like the overall setup, but I think you need to work on your pacing a bit. Cut it tighter and tighter and tighter until it can't be cut any tighter, and then cut it once more. :)

Is that LMU?
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Thanks! Yes It Is LMU, haha ... good eye!

This was 18 pages and BELIEVE ME, I cut HALF of it out in post ... as far as pacing, you think it needs to be cut even tighter? I think the thing FLYS as far as pacing, I think I might have been able to stretch it out a little even.

I'll keep that in mind though! Thanks dude !
 
Well, I'm assuming this is an ongoing episodic show, right? I don't fully subscribe to these ideas myself, but the general rule of thumb for the web is that anything over 5 minutes is risky. Especially comedy. So rather than continuing to cut, think about it in terms of: could this have been two episodes, instead of one? Which not only improves your apparent pace, and the willingness of people to view it, but also gives you more episodes to release as a side effect!
 
dougspice said:
Well, I'm assuming this is an ongoing episodic show, right? I don't fully subscribe to these ideas myself, but the general rule of thumb for the web is that anything over 5 minutes is risky. Especially comedy. So rather than continuing to cut, think about it in terms of: could this have been two episodes, instead of one? Which not only improves your apparent pace, and the willingness of people to view it, but also gives you more episodes to release as a side effect!
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makes sense! good call!
 
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