The Myth of Man

El Gato Negro

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At the present time I'm still working on writing my first feature film, entitled " The Myth of Man " and wanted the opinion of my fellow filmmakers as far as my screenplay is concern: plot, theme, character, location etc. Here are the first 20 pages in PDF and storyboard of the first page. All feed back welcomed. Gracias.

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i like it a lot. and i am a big fan of single cell animation and it seems like the american film industry has kind of thrown in the towel.

i have read in al ot of interviews where directors say the quickest way to learn how to make a film is to animate your own...

i would advise going for it. script sounds good. had me wanting to read more and yyour illustration style is very distinct.

wish i was half as talented as you.
 
thematthewbone said:
i like it a lot. and i am a big fan of single cell animation and it seems like the american film industry has kind of thrown in the towel.

i have read in al ot of interviews where directors say the quickest way to learn how to make a film is to animate your own...

i would advise going for it. script sounds good. had me wanting to read more and yyour illustration style is very distinct.

wish i was half as talented as you.
Hey bro. thanks for the positive vibes. we actually did some test still shots, with the lead actor. still working on the 3rd draft and plan on shooting on super 16mm but if it comes down to it I'll shot it on the Panasonic HVX200. Its all about how much I can raise. Its a very visual piece.

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ndfightingirish830 said:
you write on a typewriter? Sweet!

And I too enjoyed this script. Very interesting, very enticing.

Would like to read more or your stuff.

gracias. that is actually my lead actor. its part of the story. later on in the screenplay he injurys his writing hand.
 
thematthewbone said:
distinct being a very very good thing.

In your opinion would this project be better shot on film or HD? Of course the main factor is money but been seeing alot of decent and excellent cinema being shot with Panasonic HVX but of course my dream would be to shot on 35mm Arri.
 
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