"The Memorial Trunk"- Written by Robbie Comeau

Nice work but you need to edit it again for proper grammar and some spelling & punctuation. There's a few grammatical errors in it.

Sorry, not being critical but editing is key in polishing up something people want to continue reading.
 
Hey, thanks for the critique. I like 'em.

Yea - I've been meaning to touch it up. I've noticed some of the errors my self, and from reading other people's reviews.

Robbie
 
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