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[gvotano]

An 8' preview of my documentary about clandestine digging here in Italy is online at this ftp:

ftp://ufficio.kookstudio.it/

username: guido
pw: 1!guido

I did the shooting with my DVX, itw are subtitled in english and there is an english VO as well. In fact, this is meant to find some american co-producers.

It would be nice to have some feedback from you, guys.


Guido Votano

 

[Cryogenic Filmworks]

Guido.

For the most part everything looked fine and the subject was interesting. The VO sounded fine for the most part but in some spots came off a little cheesy. It seemed a bit repetitious for the voiceover to be saying every title piece as it showed on screen and in the ending the captions were totally unnecessary, just use the voiceover at that point.