students 1st demoreel
- Thread starter nurmi
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oneinfiniteloop
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Here are my crits...meant to be constructive.
1. Cut down that intro...I almost stopped it right there One rotation and the flashing is all you need.
2. Cut out the light effects between the clips, it's distracting from the content.
3. The one sequence with people popping out from behind the computers need a little easing on the keyframes.
4. I like the typography, but it's kind of all in the same vien with the avante garde and the 80's thing going on. Vary it up a little and add some other "themes" if you will.
Keep it up, add soem more conent, which can be the hardest part when you're eager to get stuff out there. Also, if you plan on using hte reel to get a job, then you should pare it down to exactly what you want to do. If you want to do mograph, then do a mograph only reel, video, do a video only reel...etc...
1. Cut down that intro...I almost stopped it right there One rotation and the flashing is all you need.
2. Cut out the light effects between the clips, it's distracting from the content.
3. The one sequence with people popping out from behind the computers need a little easing on the keyframes.
4. I like the typography, but it's kind of all in the same vien with the avante garde and the 80's thing going on. Vary it up a little and add some other "themes" if you will.
Keep it up, add soem more conent, which can be the hardest part when you're eager to get stuff out there. Also, if you plan on using hte reel to get a job, then you should pare it down to exactly what you want to do. If you want to do mograph, then do a mograph only reel, video, do a video only reel...etc...
