Splash screen, Comments??

Re: Splash screen, Comments??

I like it... a few comments.

The music cuts out too quickly.

The shattering glass isn't very good, I bet you could find a better sample.

"Flexing the visual" should hold for a second or two longer and then cut, instead of dissolve.
 
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I actually watched this with the sound off, and with all due respect, I wouldn't use it in it's current form. If this is for your productions or as an intro before your movies begin, then you're trying too hard. Your image and logo should be simple, and memorable. What I saw was quite a fruit salad, and I came away confused. With logos, less is more.

Keep it simple! :D
 
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That would be a good one, something to think about...

Try making the actual name be bigger, you could sacrifice some sky and water to accomodate.

I like that, what did you use?
 
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mino. dude it looks cool! I was actually expecting some sort of comet flying by. Maybe that could be something you can add or not. I like it. Is there supposed to be sound? I didn't hear anything. Nice job brotha. :)
 
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Thanks Spider...The commet passed after I faded out.

No sound yet
 
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Logo dark, too dark, and hard to read.
Reflection too bright, distracting.
Try a cleaner font.

You are after all, promoting yourself, it needs to be clear.
 
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Points taken. I think you're probably right on the reflection being too bright. I have to say though that it looks way better on an NTSC monitor. Thanks for feedback
 
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Might look good on a monitor, true, but are all your clips going to be seen only on a [TV]monitor?

See if you can find a happy medium between computer and [TV]monitor.
 
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Mino,

I tried to email you a glass breaking SFX. Let me know it works. I like them both. Cool stuff.
 
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Thanks Pookie...I'm actuall reworking the lighting setup as we speak to see if I can find a happy medium. after that I'll work on the commet for Spider

Muir Boda... Thanks, Hasn't shown up yet but stuff from the forum somtimes works in some sort of time lag for me.
 
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Mino, Definitely like the first video. Very cool. The broken glass effect doesn't work. Cut it. Everything else looks really clean and sleek. Nice stuff.
 
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I actually didn't mind the font. It would actually be better if it was a little thicker. Kind of how I like my ladies. ;)
 
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With all the font choices out there, there probably is one called "spiders ladies.pfm" ;)
 
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