Hi guys
I haven't posted much in here lately, but have been hanging around nevertheless
I've recently taken my first stab at writing in English - I usually work i Danish, but as that is a somewhat limited market, I'm thinking I need to expand. It's a short western, with a comedy twist, and I'm pretty happy with it.
The thing is, that all my usual "readers" meaning friends and colleagues from the Danish film-industry, are all native Danish-speakers like me. So I was hoping that I could persuade a few of you guys in here to read it and come up with a few words of constructive critisism both on the story/structure/idea, but definitely also on the language - especially regarding dialogue.
I'm don't wanna post i publicly, but if you drop me a PM I will send you a copy. We can discuss the feedback i private or here on the forums - that's up to you
Best regards
Jonas
I haven't posted much in here lately, but have been hanging around nevertheless
I've recently taken my first stab at writing in English - I usually work i Danish, but as that is a somewhat limited market, I'm thinking I need to expand. It's a short western, with a comedy twist, and I'm pretty happy with it.
The thing is, that all my usual "readers" meaning friends and colleagues from the Danish film-industry, are all native Danish-speakers like me. So I was hoping that I could persuade a few of you guys in here to read it and come up with a few words of constructive critisism both on the story/structure/idea, but definitely also on the language - especially regarding dialogue.
I'm don't wanna post i publicly, but if you drop me a PM I will send you a copy. We can discuss the feedback i private or here on the forums - that's up to you
Best regards
Jonas
