RedSpectrumPictures
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I was wondering what everyone thought of my short film idea, and if anyone would want to help me make it better. Basically It will be a very short film, probably around 5 minutes, I want it to be the tale of two skinhead friends (inspired by shane meadows films such as This is England and Dead Mans Shoes) who get into an argument one day about something (havent decided about what yet). one of them gets killed with a rock, we follow the other one has we see him feeling guilty and regretting what had happened (dramatic soundtrack of a guitar or something plays over a montage of clips of him walking alone etc..) A first person voiceover is heard throughout the whole short film.
And then I want something like 'thats what should have happened, and then we see the argument again and the other one gets hurt.
Im not too sure how to structure this or what to add to the narrative, and sorry if it is confusing to understand my explanation.
If anyone has anything to say, that could help me or say if you like or hate the idea, please leave a reply
And then I want something like 'thats what should have happened, and then we see the argument again and the other one gets hurt.
Im not too sure how to structure this or what to add to the narrative, and sorry if it is confusing to understand my explanation.
If anyone has anything to say, that could help me or say if you like or hate the idea, please leave a reply