Script feedback, review - Children's TV.

Silentcity

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Written a script for a live action children's fantasy TV series.
(Episode 1 – pilot/ roughly 18 pages)
Just would like someone to review it and double check for grammar and pronunciation, as my English is not that great.

E-mail me at info @ slavecircus.com

I will send you the synopsis of the entire series and the episode 1 script.
Like a lot of the work here I hope the first episode will unfold the series correctly. If not I could use advice on how it could.

I appreciate your help and time if anyone does volunteer.
Thank you,
Farhad
 
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