ScreenPlay needs YOUR Feedback! -The Dawn Of The Dark Angels-

Hello, i'm new to all this!
I have started to write a screenplay, it's not at all long at the moment so it wont take up too much of anyones time! only unless of course you'r in a hurry to get to work, but if thats the case, you shouldn't be on here! Hehe.. :)
It's a Horror (ish) screenplay, set in london at about 2019.
It's only a scene long *Roughly 4 mins long?*, just wanted peoples opinions or advice before i went any further. I don't have a clue how to 'Propperly!' write out a screenplay, but i gave my best effort! :) So yes, Pm me, or something and i will send it to you, or email it to you!
Thankyou for you'r help!
Holly!
:kiss:
 
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