Rogue Apache Helicopter (Action Scene )

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unwindfilms

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G'Day all
This is a action scene idea for a short film. Testing Apache green screen footage provided by another youtube user and mixing it up with some VFXs and New York footage in the background
The special agent (JB) has a very powerful handgun designed specially for him by the International Counter-Terrorist Agency.I appreciate any opinion
Cheers
Carlos
 
First impression, the helo is too "crisp" and shadowing is not quite there. It stands out too much from the background. Soften the edges of it, and knock the highlights down a bit. With the flight from the hard point POV, as the background turns, bank the helo to give the feel of flight.

Second scene with the Humvee: Individual flames are not small enough. It looks like a close up of a small explosion.

JR shooting helo: recoil and flashes don't match. The flash comes first and maybe 3-5 frames later, the actor should be showing the recoil. That's just a matter of retiming your flashes to match his reactions.

Helo explosion: Having the helo just vaporize with a small explosion doesn't work for me. Slow the explosion down, add debris/residual smoke show the carcass of the helo fall out of frame.

It's got a lot of promise and just tweaking it will make a huge difference.
 
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