Re: Opinion on Website Banner

J.R. Hudson

J.R. Hudson

Spirit Animal
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And yes, I know the images would not be horizontal if it was for real  :P  Heres an example in webpage style:

Is this looking cool or is looking like arse? Currently, it is same banner minus sprockets. But Im thinking of changing. I need the opinions...

49-smaalweb.jpg
 
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Looks cool. Very clean and professional. Although I would move the sun/lensflare just a little in each frame, so it appears as though it's actual cells from the animated logo.
 
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Thats a great idea P.K. I will def do that this week. Good detail call.
 
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No problem. I can't make my own stuff look good, but I sure love to criticize other peoples beautiful work. ;)

Also, I know you said you were removing the sprockets, but what if you just made them much darker? As you probably already noticed, they're distracting from the logo because they're the brightest objects. The sprockets should stay, just fade them into the black more. I'll send you an example.
 
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Looks great. I second P.K.'s suggestions. One thing, I find the text in the links a bit hard to read. If they were bigger or maybe just kerned a little more, I think that would help.
 
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Tks Frizzle. I noticed that too. (Your talking about the hyperlink images?). Kerning will Round them or smooth them? Ill do this too!
 
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Like this P.K. ?

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or............................. ?
 
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Kerning will increase the space between characters. (Yes, the hyperlinks--bio, reel, etc.) Are you using Photoshop?
 
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Yes and No :P

At work it is PaintS and at home PhotoS

Its all JPEGS to me :D
 
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Slightly adjusted:

49-smaalweb2.jpg



btw, @30 fps, the motion will be too slight to bother with for 5 frames.
 
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My only thing would be if you use an actually image of a real film strip. Just an idea. Other than that it looks cool. Sweet n Simple.  :)
 
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Nice additions pookie. That's a really good look.

John, forget that stuff I sent ya! ;)
 
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. i like it. i have a similar peice of art in the site im working on in my spare time... (i dont really have spare time, ..which is why my site is still on paper :P)
 
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Ill look for some real 35mm filmstrip imagery (one with an optical strip as well). Tks for the input everyone.
 
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Personally I think it sucks and you should start over.

Just kidding! I dig it. 8)
 
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[quote author=John Hudson link=board=Offtopic;num=1102141203;start=0#14 date=12/04/04 at 09:51:45]Ill look for some real 35mm filmstrip imagery (one with an optical strip as well).  Tks for the input everyone.  [/quote]
I have a reel of a 35mm Charlie's Angel's trailer...If you want I can take a close up of it, and send it to you, then you can photo shop it?? Just tryin' to help...
 
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