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Jay Jay

Jay Jay

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hey guys i did not get alot of feedback about my website, please if you have the time take a look at it and let me know what you think about the site and my work. before i finalize it.

thank you soooo much.

www.jayjaystudios.com
 
Looks good. Personally I don't really like the flowery thing as it seems a bit too much. But you certainly point out what kind of jobs you want, so that is excellent.
 
Super pro Jay Jay

1. I'd lighten the blue in Jay Jay & capturing moments that last a lieftime. Keep the same HUE but lighten in to make it pop more (More contrast against the charcoal backdrop)

2. I'd bring everything up about 1/2 " to 3/4 " as it seems to be bottom heavy

3. I'd make the name JAY JAY PRODUCTIONS to be a HYPERLINK that always brings one back to the home page. (Not just the small link at the bottom)

That's my .02 ! Looks great !
 
Jay,

and now for something a little different; the still photography and digital album samples are great but when you get to the video you start talking about the state of the art of your equipment. Unfortunatley being located in Southern California you need to be careful how you set your customers expectations and I'm not sure your customers would consider your system "state-of-the-art."

My point is this, you have an artistic website, focus on that and not the fact that you have a 3 ccd camera etc. That doesn't go very far in differentiation your services from your competitors. You can get more leverage by marketing your artistic style or vision [your competitors can't simply buy that]. Explain the process you use to help them capture their wedding. By talking about keeping your equipment up to date your appealing to a technical buyer, cool if your trying to sell an HDTV. You'll probably get more business appealing to the emotional or econimoc buyer.

Just something to consider.
 
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