Not sure what to do....

Ozhair

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Okay, here's the deal;

About 18 months ago, some fellow local filmmakers approached me and asked if I'd like to contribute a short script for an anthology they were putting together. I knocked something together that I thought wasn't half bad and gave it to them. Stupidly, as these were guys I know and had worked with, I didn't worry about any sort of paperwork.

After only making a couple of films for the anthology (not mine), the project fell apart, and I didn't really think much more about it until the last couple of months, when, looking for something to shoot in the second half of the year, I came across the anthology script. Since the anthology had fallen apart, I figured I'd do it myself. I hadn't actually gotten into the production stage.

Then, a few days ago, I get a call from the anthology director. At a filmmaking workshop he'd pitched the idea in my script as something to be made as part of the workshop later this month. Fine, I thought, the script well get made even though it's not me doing it.

Then he mentions that he'd actually lost the file of the script, and had pitched it based on what he remembered of it. I offered to resend the file. "That's okay" he says, "We've written our own version of it."

I wasn't too sure how to react to this at the time. I was told I would be getting a "Based on" credit. I did suggest that I might shoot my own version of the script if they weren't going to use it, which he didn't sound very thrilled about.

Yesterday I tracked down a copy of their version of the script. While the setup and a couple of key points are the same, the script (obviously) contains not a single line of my dialogue, the characterisations have been utterly changed as has the ending. And I honestly don't feel that the changes have been for the better. What started out as a simple story has become ham-fisted and over-complicated.

But, since they're about to go into production, and a number of people involved in the workshop are people I'm likely to want to work with in the future (it's not a huge filmmaking community here), I'd rather not make trouble by trying to stop them from making it, and I doubt the director will be open to doing my version of the script as he's the one that did the "rewrite".

So, should I just let it lie with their version, or should I still push ahead with producing my script, which I really like? If I do that, it means that there'll be two films with essentially the same plot doing the festival circuit.

I know rewrites to this degree happen in Hollywood all the time, but there's paperwork and financial compensation giving the producers the right to do pretty much whatever they want.

I think if they'd actually done a rewrite of my script it wouldn't bother me so much. But the writing their own version based on what they remember of reading my script 18 months previously bothers me a bit.

Thoughts?
 
Since you believe their version isn't up to par with your version I wouldn't worry much about it. Let them give you a credit and move on to your version. You could also work on another script and give it some time before shooting your version...let their version die it's normal death. If it were a feature and the possibilities of making $$$ were more at stake then you might want to get more involved in securing what's due to you. Not that shorts can't make money, but it's less likely than a feature.

Keep moving forward. Every second you spend thinking about them and what they are producing is a second you lose. Realize that you are above all of this and that you have bigger fish to fry. Think big! Plan big! Act big! You've learned a valuable lesson with this situation...but show them you are so much more talented and you will end up the winner.
 
Since you sound like you don't really care about the project, having just knocked out something not half bad, I don't see why you should care about them making it. If it's really bad ask to have your name taken off, otherwise go with it. You wrote it for them anyway, so it's not really that unfair. Having friends is a lot more valuable than a short script.
 
If anything, ask for your name to be taken off. I wouldn't produce another version of the script, though. Just have to let bygones be bygones in this case.
 
Live and learn...

Live and learn...

I think you learned a hard lesson here. Never trust anybody regarding the scripts you write.. Unfortunately this goes on a lot in the industry and even more so now we have an internet where spec scripts and shorts can be downloaded from places such a simply scripts, etc.

Copyright your script and or register it with the WGA before you give it out to potential filmmakers just to cover yourself.

Usually professionals don't do this kind of stuff for fear of being sued but small-time film and video makes do fall into this trap mainly because they can't write scripts and have no sense of dramatic structure in writing otherwise they'd be writing their own scripts, right?

Forget it and consider this a cheap price paid for the experience..

Your wiser now so be careful with your work and who you give it to and entrust it with in the future..

It's happened to me too so I know where you're coming from but I made that mistake once and never repeated it..

Live and learn, right?
 
I agree. And some might call me overprotective, but I register my script treatments before showing them to anybody, then same with first draft, then the final draft. One reason is that copyright registration has different protective rights depending on if a work has been 'published' or not, and I consider it legally more binding to register a work before even emailing it to a friend (which could be construed as being 'published'); if I were to sell a script the buyer would certainly want assurance that it was registered before being spread around on the net (and once you even email something to a friend, it is out of your hands electronically and could get passed around in emails, etc).

I think you learned a hard lesson here. Never trust anybody regarding the scripts you write.. Unfortunately this goes on a lot in the industry and even more so now we have an internet ...
 
It sucks, but more so than learning to be careful with sharing your creative ideas, I think this is a cheap opportunity to witness your own work massacred. It happens all the time and has happened to me. Unless you have a good working relationship with A-list talent, the director, or an executive producer, you can expect to have some of your scripts absolutely mangled.

Since this was a short and you only thought it was passably good, punch a pillow, vent your frustration, and move on. Hell, you should be flattered that other people liked your ideas enough to "borrow" them.
 
I've been there. Not as a writer ('cause I'm not a writer!) but as a photographer. People photoshop out your logo/watermark so they can the photo printed at one of those drug store kiosks without paying you.

Certain creative positions are just not appreciated. People think what they do is easy and so should be free.

Such is life.
 
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