New Website

Heh...no room for improvement eh? I guess once you hit perfection, there's no need for critiques!
 
Looks good, from a security POV please update your email from plain text;

use URL Encoding to hide it:

http://www.safeemail.org/

then change this;

Code:
<a href="ksant@waterandoil-productions.com">ksant@waterandoil-productions.com</a>

to this:

Code:
<a href="ksant@waterandoil-productions.com">ksant@waterandoil-productions.com</a>

P.S please note DVXuser decypts the above so they look identical, so you cant; actually see the difference, just use the above link and you will see what I mean

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Small crit, the black and white color scheme is good, however I feel the top banner with the blue color seems some what at odds, you should try shifting towards grays IMHO, this would then sit more in tune with the CP.
 
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Thanks a lot Anhar, I'll check the link out. I'll take everything you all said into consideration and maybe go towards a shade of gray for the banner instead.

Thanks again!

Kegan
 
Looking really sharp Kegan - really like the new logo alot. Agree with Anhar on the banner - grayscale would like nice I think.

The only other thing I really dont like is when you go to home you are just hit with giant letters that dont seem to fit screaming promo. I'd make the promo thing a bit less prominent (still prominent though) and go for a more fitting font. Maybe throw up a flashy BTS pic or something to fill the void. Just seems like lots of negative space and fonts that dont fit when you first get there.

Really like what you've done though - looking good.
 
Thanks a lot Jeff. Yeah, I'm really not a fan of the promotion graphic myself. It was just sort of thrown together last minute anyway I think. I'll work on that myself and see if what can be done about the shade of the banner. Once changes are made, I'll post back.

On a side note, you don't think a flashy BTS picture might be tacky? I've never really done a promotional offer before, so I'm trying to figure out what would be eye catching while remaining streamline with the rest of the site.

Appreciated,

Kegan
 
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