New short film

Vesa Rahkola

Vesa Rahkola

New member
Hi everybody

Just joined this site and curious of getting feedback about my last 11-minute short film called Apple Crush

You can view it with quicktime at www.injectimbalance.com/apple.mov

It was shot on Sony HD with a budget of £3000 courtesy of Northern Film and Media here in the Northeast of England

Hope you enjoy it

Best,

Vesa

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I think the fact that you had to post it 5 times is a bit of a turn off!

Piece was well done, technically. Editing was okay, but it could be a LOT shorter.
As soon as I saw it was funded by some gov. agency type organization I thought: I bet it has a sex scene, violence, and guns in it. I am pleased I was wrong about one of those! :)

Overall a well done short.
 
Thanks for the feedback Cmessineo and Vidled

I literally joined the site 2 mins before posting those so rules weren't clear. Sorry about that.

I wrote, directed and edited it so just wanted specific feedback from people specifying in those areas.

Apple Crush is meant to give the hint that it's a loose interpretation of Adam's fall from paradise. The bible is full of sex and violence... Allthough the point is not either. It's Adam trying to grow to be a man and become a better person.

Which areas did you feel could have been left out?

Best

Vesa
 
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