Robbie Comeau
Como's back. back again
Here what I got so far:
int: small, empty room. night
A bright glowing light is shown at the top of the dark, small room. Empty white walls are seen. NICK, a short, brown eyed male is leaning back against the wall. Eye's closed, looks hurt. He is tied with rope around his torso. Blood faded on his arms and shirt. NICK opens his eyes. He moans and grunts as he tries to move his neck. He raises his hands which are wrapped in chains. He becomes frightened.
int: garage. night
A sharp, big bloody knife is getting cleaned with an old dirty rag. We see the back of a tall man with a mask over his head. We now see his big, bulging eyes right in front of the lens. He is looking down aggressive, fierce, while he makes grunting noises.
int: room. night
NICK'S face is seen. He is scared.
NICK
What the f-
He pants.
NICK
How'd I get here?
He breathes heavily. He tries to rip his hands out of the chains, but fails.
NICK
HELLO? I NEED HELP! ANYONE?
Nothing. Silence. He waits, looks around. The room is small, and there is nothing in it. NICK tries to break loose, face scrunched up, eyes shut. He can't pull through. He moves his whole body around, and we can see in his eyes he can't get out.
NICK
ANYBODY! HOLY **** GET ME OUT!
SLAM! A door can be heard in the distance, slamming shut. It came from the stairs outside the door. NICK looks back and forth, quickly and scared. The door to the room NICK is in whips open. The man's feet are shown. We see NICK'S face look up, in terror. His mouth drops, and he yells.
NICK
HELP! SOMEONE! GET ME OUTTA HERE!!!
The man walks in. He comes towards NICK. NICK is frightened and starts screaming.
NICK
WHAT HELL DO YOU WANT!
The man grabs NICK from his shoulders, and shakes him.
NICK
GET OFF ME
The man then brings NICK closer. He starts to sniff.
NICK
YOU CREEPER ***** GET THE HELL OFF!
The man then starts from NICK'S chin, and takes a big smell, slowly, as he moves to the top of his forehead. NICK takes a head butt, and the man falls back. The man grunts as he gets up. He stands, angrily, stomps his feat, and leaves the room mad, and slams the door. NICKS face is seen. He is in shock.
NICK
What the hell was that?
He breathes heavily.
NICK
How did I get here?
He looks down and thinks.
FLASH BACK SEQ.
NICK is walking through a dark pathway. Fences on both sides. He thinks he hears something and turns around. He continues to walk after there was nothing there. He hears it again, looks, and sees nothing. As he turns around, he gets grabbed viciously by the same man who has kept him in the small dark room.
END FLASH BACK SEQ.
NICK is breathing, looking down.
NICK
****!
Silence.
The silence breaks when NICK hears music. It starts off soft then gets louder, and louder and keeps playing over and over again:
Ring around the rosies a pocket full of posies; ashes, ashes all fall down.
NICK gets frightened. He mutters under his breath:
NICK
What the hell?
The music is still going, this time louder.
Ring around the rosies a pocket full of posies; ashes, ashes all fall down.
NICK yells:
NICK
WHAT DO YOU WANT! GET ME OUTTA HERE!
Music continues in the background. It get louder and louder, when the door slams open. The music goes to mute. The man comes in with a piece of cloth in his hand. He quickly grabs NICK and wraps the cloth around his mouth. NICK is talking, but the words are to mumbled to be deciphered. The man looks at him again, and takes another big smell. NICK is trying to back away, as he leans back. The man gets angry. He grabs NICK by the hair, and pulls him back with a release, hard push back into the wall.
NICK grunts. The man gets up and exits the room. NICK has trouble getting up, but he manages it, and then rests his head against the wall.
int: small, empty room. night
A bright glowing light is shown at the top of the dark, small room. Empty white walls are seen. NICK, a short, brown eyed male is leaning back against the wall. Eye's closed, looks hurt. He is tied with rope around his torso. Blood faded on his arms and shirt. NICK opens his eyes. He moans and grunts as he tries to move his neck. He raises his hands which are wrapped in chains. He becomes frightened.
int: garage. night
A sharp, big bloody knife is getting cleaned with an old dirty rag. We see the back of a tall man with a mask over his head. We now see his big, bulging eyes right in front of the lens. He is looking down aggressive, fierce, while he makes grunting noises.
int: room. night
NICK'S face is seen. He is scared.
NICK
What the f-
He pants.
NICK
How'd I get here?
He breathes heavily. He tries to rip his hands out of the chains, but fails.
NICK
HELLO? I NEED HELP! ANYONE?
Nothing. Silence. He waits, looks around. The room is small, and there is nothing in it. NICK tries to break loose, face scrunched up, eyes shut. He can't pull through. He moves his whole body around, and we can see in his eyes he can't get out.
NICK
ANYBODY! HOLY **** GET ME OUT!
SLAM! A door can be heard in the distance, slamming shut. It came from the stairs outside the door. NICK looks back and forth, quickly and scared. The door to the room NICK is in whips open. The man's feet are shown. We see NICK'S face look up, in terror. His mouth drops, and he yells.
NICK
HELP! SOMEONE! GET ME OUTTA HERE!!!
The man walks in. He comes towards NICK. NICK is frightened and starts screaming.
NICK
WHAT HELL DO YOU WANT!
The man grabs NICK from his shoulders, and shakes him.
NICK
GET OFF ME
The man then brings NICK closer. He starts to sniff.
NICK
YOU CREEPER ***** GET THE HELL OFF!
The man then starts from NICK'S chin, and takes a big smell, slowly, as he moves to the top of his forehead. NICK takes a head butt, and the man falls back. The man grunts as he gets up. He stands, angrily, stomps his feat, and leaves the room mad, and slams the door. NICKS face is seen. He is in shock.
NICK
What the hell was that?
He breathes heavily.
NICK
How did I get here?
He looks down and thinks.
FLASH BACK SEQ.
NICK is walking through a dark pathway. Fences on both sides. He thinks he hears something and turns around. He continues to walk after there was nothing there. He hears it again, looks, and sees nothing. As he turns around, he gets grabbed viciously by the same man who has kept him in the small dark room.
END FLASH BACK SEQ.
NICK is breathing, looking down.
NICK
****!
Silence.
The silence breaks when NICK hears music. It starts off soft then gets louder, and louder and keeps playing over and over again:
Ring around the rosies a pocket full of posies; ashes, ashes all fall down.
NICK gets frightened. He mutters under his breath:
NICK
What the hell?
The music is still going, this time louder.
Ring around the rosies a pocket full of posies; ashes, ashes all fall down.
NICK yells:
NICK
WHAT DO YOU WANT! GET ME OUTTA HERE!
Music continues in the background. It get louder and louder, when the door slams open. The music goes to mute. The man comes in with a piece of cloth in his hand. He quickly grabs NICK and wraps the cloth around his mouth. NICK is talking, but the words are to mumbled to be deciphered. The man looks at him again, and takes another big smell. NICK is trying to back away, as he leans back. The man gets angry. He grabs NICK by the hair, and pulls him back with a release, hard push back into the wall.
NICK grunts. The man gets up and exits the room. NICK has trouble getting up, but he manages it, and then rests his head against the wall.