Need Resume Feedback... please!

jlkirby77

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Hey,

Alright, so here's a little back-story. I'm 21 years old and just recently finished my coursework for an Associates Degree. I've always been a good student but unfortunately the college I went to changed programs in the middle of my degree and I kinda got screwed. As a result, I had to substitute certain classes for ones that weren't available and now I'm waiting on my degree to process... I've already missed out on a semester because of that nonsense but I'm trying to get an early start on my Bachelors degree by moving early and finding a job for the school year. A former colleague/professor of mine sent me a link on Monster.com for a job posting in the same city I plan on going to school and it sounds very promising. The only problem is, they're looking for somebody with a degree and 2+ Years of professional experience. I have the 2+ years of experience but still no "official" degree. So in order to land this job I'm going to need a really nice resume to get my foot in the door.

I've always had good luck finding and keeping jobs; especially for someone my age, but the problem here is making it past the resume stage. I need to convince them that I'm a worthy candidate so they can look past my age and lack of degree.

Here's a copy of the posting...

"Video Shooter/Editor
About the Job

Shooter/​ Editor:

Individual must have a strong background in remote production;
excellent shooting and lighting skills and the ability to work well with
clients in the field.​ Individual must be able to think quickly
and shoot efficiently.​

As part of a production team, this individual will join three other
Avid editors.​ Individual must be proficient in technical aspects
of editing including: logging, capturing, efficient use of keyboard
shortcuts, project back-up, mastering to tape/​file/​disc,
and authoring DVDs.​ Editor should be proficient with leading
editing software – preferably Avid.​ Background in Photoshop and
After Effects is a plus.​

This is a highly service oriented company and the candidate needs to be
passionate about doing his/​her best for the customer (everything
is doable in our world) not matter what the budget.​ People skills
are a high priority.​

College degree required.​

2-3 years experience in TV or media production at a minimum.​4-5
preferred.​"


I've attached a copy of my resume, and most of skills I've acquired since highschool line up perfectly with this position.


Any feedback would be awesome, I really want a job for the school year so I can keep student loans to a minimum and have a chance to apply what I'm learning at school.
 

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