allystokes
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im a film student from SA, i have to direct this script which i didnt write and am having trouble with making a "first explosion" or problem for the protagonists right in the begining.
http://www.yourfilehost.com/media.php?cat=other&file=script_nnn.doc
They have no problem the lady stops for them and they get what they want. The first explosion comes to late when we think they have been swindled and Harrun wants to kill them. if you could give me any ideas or feed back i would be really grateful.
sorry about the dodgy posting site but i couldnt find anywhere else
http://www.yourfilehost.com/media.php?cat=other&file=script_nnn.doc
They have no problem the lady stops for them and they get what they want. The first explosion comes to late when we think they have been swindled and Harrun wants to kill them. if you could give me any ideas or feed back i would be really grateful.
sorry about the dodgy posting site but i couldnt find anywhere else
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