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Lucky Duck
Hey everyone,
I had my 16 year old daughter and a couple of her friends write a story that I told them I would shoot. It's written very much as you would expect from a 16 year old...very simplistic and lacking some true reactions to a fairly strange world.
I would welcome anyone willing to take a look at it and make some suggestions as to how it might come together better. I'm actually beginning the shoot in the morning but the "alternate world" part of the story, which takes up a good chunk of the film, is being shot next week. This is a no budget film so any suggestions need to be within the realm already established. No props that would require spending money or that would require logistical shenanigans allowed
Anyway, only those seriously interested in helping me in this short deadline should respond. If you are interested, please send me a PM and I'll forward you the "script" as it actually is right now.
Thanks
I had my 16 year old daughter and a couple of her friends write a story that I told them I would shoot. It's written very much as you would expect from a 16 year old...very simplistic and lacking some true reactions to a fairly strange world.
I would welcome anyone willing to take a look at it and make some suggestions as to how it might come together better. I'm actually beginning the shoot in the morning but the "alternate world" part of the story, which takes up a good chunk of the film, is being shot next week. This is a no budget film so any suggestions need to be within the realm already established. No props that would require spending money or that would require logistical shenanigans allowed
Anyway, only those seriously interested in helping me in this short deadline should respond. If you are interested, please send me a PM and I'll forward you the "script" as it actually is right now.
Thanks