Need a serious sexist line.

Charli said:
Some people, not necessarily men now mind you, don't need a reason to exhibit a crass behavior, they just are one donut short of a dozen good sense (lol, okay, something like that).
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Why don't you go check your makeup and let the men talk...:evil:
 
"I got just the tool you need, girls."...Unrealted, worst pick-up line I've heard someone use on a girl, "I gotta tell you...my penis is talking to me."
 
If it were me, I wouldn't have the man make the sexist comment to the women -- I'd have him make it to his wife, but ABOUT the women. And he would be sure it was loud enough for them to hear. Something like, "Look Mabel -- dykes on bikes!"
 
The sexist man could tell his wife, "You know when I said I wanted to live my next life as a bicycle seat? I didn't mean one of theirs..." Or some variation.
 
StefanHaynes said:
This post garners my 100% approval and agreement.

I honestly don't think this scene works. Dropping a random character in to speak a single, relatively unimportant line, and following it up by another random character (the wife) saying another unimportant line just isn't good scriptwriting.
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I disagree, if the guy is making a unprovoked sexist remark then it's revealing part of his character. He doesn't need some external story related motivation. A redneck driving past a black guy and shouting an epithet similarly doesn't need motivation.
 
I'm voting for Timmy's as the best line, and really, Tim, can't believe you could come up with such sexist comments! lol.

Capt - on rye?
 
Agree that the interaction should involve the wife it is going to be the source of suspecting him in her murder. Here's sexest, and angry involving the wife and the girls.

"What I can't even look at girsl now? Jesus, Carol."
"I didn't say anything."
"I'm so sick of your ****. Do you have to ruin a frickin' bike ride in the park!"
thinking the conversation would escalate in volume as they passed so they could hear all of it.

here's a shorter version

"What I can't even look at girls now? Jesus, Carol you gotta ruin our whole damn afternoon?"

a harsher version

"What I can't even look at girls now? Jesus, Carol just shut your mouth and ride."
 
"Where you two peddlin off to? Definitely not to the polling station, cause everyone round these parts knows women shouldn't vote."
 
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