Need a sci-fi script read and commented on- SOLUM PLANET

[Jon Starr]

Hey guys,

I have short 8 page sci-fi script that I'm looking to get some constructive crit on.

Wondering if there are any takers? I don't want to post it for all to see, so if you could just PM me with your address and I can send you the script and a comment sheet to fill out.

The script and sheet shouldn't take you more than 20-30 minutes (just a guess) depending on how descriptive you are.

Let me know!

 

[Charli]

I don't do script sheets, but I'll be glad to murder your story if you still need help.

 

[Jon Starr]

Ummmm, okay. Sure. Sent you the script.

If you guys don't have time for the comment sheet that's fine. Anything would help.