My first documentary.

swuroshi

swuroshi

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Hello everyone attend this forum to write but very little.
I wanted to show you this little documentary that I made and ask you what you think, unfortunately, in Italian without subtitles, for those who do not understand Italian I will be more difficult to make judgments.
Thank you.



https://vimeo.com/70860917
 
You picked a difficult topic. Technically its OK. The tone and music is suitably sombre. Who is your intended audience? What was your purpose in making the video? Makes it easier to see whether you met your goals. Could you have included some more historical context outtakes? Maps? Interviews with descendants? A third of your four minute video is taken up with credits when five seconds of credits would have been enough.
 
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thanks for your response but I did not understand what you mean by the phrase below, thank you again.
A third of your four minute video is taken up with credits when five seconds of credits would have been enough.
 
Most of us aren't fluent in Italian, Swuroshi! It's difficult for us to comment without knowledge of the language.

It's hard to understand much of what's happening without understanding the narration. I can tell that it's about a graveyard, maybe death, maybe philosophical/literary in nature, and that's about it.
 
I understand, and what I thought happened, as the commentary in Italian, for those who are not conscious language is difficult to understand the whole thing.
sorry.

: Embarasse
 
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