My Film Production Company's New Logo & Motion Graphic!

Nice! My only critique would be the black screen for the first 3 seconds, which doesn't sound like a lot, but feels like I should be seeing something during that time.
 
Hi Kyran,

Heres, my comments.

The dark intro was just a lil bit too long. Not much, but just a bit.
If you keep it too long for suspence, then you must reward the wait with something mind blowing.

For the 3D object/logo, increase the polygon iterations so when the object/logo tip that was first revealed
will be smoother and not angled, this is a first giveaway of a "cheap" looking 3D logo.

For the 3D Logo Text, my comment is that, after the flipping over of the TEXT and the zoom out or truck out of the camera,
you might want to scale the z axis of the text to make them thinner or almost flat so the text's silhouette would look a bit better,
the extrusion of the 3D texts, at that fov/camera distance is not so pleasing especially with the letters L and the last N.
(you can get away with this if the front faces of the texts are brighter than the extruded sides)

I would prefer the Logo to be smaller in the end, and more center, The framing puts your LogoText too low in the frame.

Music is OK.

Hope my comments help.
 
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