Mortgage WIP

Numbers behind CPA animation: Wouldn't it be cool (and a subliminal message) if you could make all of the numbers GROW in value? Also, the transition should have the text fly left and right instead of having an overlay block some of the numbers.


The picture of the family holding hands is only visible for one second. Its a little too fast even for someone like me who does tweaky editing.

When you use the paint function to point to CLU, wouldn't it be cool if it were like someone writing with a black sharpie, and have the acompanying sound of a marker?

On the house, the clouds could be animated, to puff up out of the chimney one at a time, to bring your focus to there after you fade in CMB.

Good animations, It just seems too fast. Unless you have a time restriction, I would slow it down a bit.
 
Well, the only time constraint is following the pace of VO, which is a little brisk. I have to go in an do some slight time remapping, the family bit is a litte fast, but the symbol registers.

I agree with the cloud puffs, didn't have time to do it perfectly, but that should be in the final version. Oh, and if you have a Sharpie marker sound, send it over, it would be a nice add :)
 
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