Looking for feedback

Hi guys,

I wrote a short comedic piece about Canada adopting a President instead of a Prime Minister. A lot of people think that politicians are arrogant and not that bright, so I over play that angle.

Anyways, if anyone here is an experienced screen writer that would like to read it over and give feedback, I would be more than happy to send it to you the script in an email. Please feel free to PM me.

Thanks.
 
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