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Here's my .02-
I liked the content - it made me smile
. As for the dolly shots, I assume that they were the ones at the begining when you were tracking with the guy. I think that they would have come out better if you had kept it mounted to the dolly rather then going handheld on the dolly. A dolly shot would work there as you track with him. But because you did it handheld, that is how the shot looks, and it is hard to tell that you're "dollying". Not that it is necissary bad, but I assume by your post that you wanted a dolly shot rather then a handheld look.
BTW, I loved the dance at the end! LOL!
I liked the content - it made me smile
BTW, I loved the dance at the end! LOL!