Imput Please on my short

Re: Imput Please on my short

Good work....very tense and liked the ending :)

The pacing was also good.
 
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I am very impressed thus far.

I can't watch all of it at this minute though..

The shots are so great that I REALLY, really, really want to see them much bigger.
 
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Good work Brian - any details?

Budget, equipment, shooting schedule, plans for film, etc.

Thanx for sharing!

I might add a tiny bit more showing how distraught he is. Went for the gun pretty quick.
 
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Budget was around $1600.00. The film was shot on a Canon scoopic. The car scenes were shot with a single suction car mount and lit with a china ball. The stock I used was Kodak 7218 Vision 2. I agree, he should be more distraught. This was one of those lessons that teaches you how to be a better director. I was more concerned about the shots than the acting and it shows. However I learned a valuable lesson from this film that I hope will make the next one better.
 
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[quote author=Brian Thompson link=board=Offtopic;num=1103578569;start=0#7 date=12/20/04 at 20:10:21] I was more concerned about the shots than the acting and it shows. .[/quote]

I think that is a tad harsh! It is very good work Brian and a very minor detail.

You should be very happy with how it turned out.
 
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Looks good. The only thing is that the Glock style gun you have doesn't make that type of suond when cocked. You have the Hammer style sound effect that you would hear from a revolver of some sort, the glock, when being loaded has the other sound that you always hear in the movies. Good stuff though.
 
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Hi there-

I watched it at about 3AM this morning. I PMed my comments.
 
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[quote author=Pooh link=board=Offtopic;num=1103578569;start=0#11 date=12/21/04 at 10:01:09]Hi there-

I watched it at about 3AM this morning. I PMed my comments.[/quote]

Sounds ominous 8)
 
Re: Imput Please on my short

Nice work. The rape and knifing scene works very well. I think the piece could use some color timing to reflect the content. At the moment it seems too light when the material of your piece is much darker. I really liked your beginning. Keep us updated with your progress.
 
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