I want it ripped apart

Doc Bernard

Doc Bernard

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I am trying to get a copy of my contract for clients posted here. I want it ripped, torn and holes punched in it. Show me areas of improvement, so I can get it airtight, yet fair for both parties. Ideas?
 
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I'll go one better.

I'll go one better.

I figured a way to do this. You can upload .txt files, so I just converted the Word file to text. Sorry, it looks better in Word.
 

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No one? Rip into it from either side of the fence, "Client" or "Producer". If you hired me and I handed this to you, what would be your reaction and what would you have a problem with? Mind you, I am not requesting actual legal advice, I would go to an attorney for that, and will once I think it is ready and fair. But talk to me from a signer's point of view.
 
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my 2 cents is it's too long, too formal and could make a client run away.
I like hand shake deals but do understand that sometimes a contact has to be singed.
I can't think of a time I've had to have a clinet do this though.
That said, I'd write it myself in a less formal language and keep it simple with what both parties agree to do.
Lawyer jargan is a major turn off.
 
Interesting, didn't even consider that aspect. So, try plain English, huh?

This is exactly the type of feedback I am wanting. More, keep it coming!
 
I'm with Grinner. I usually have a hand shake and 50% deposit. If things get too shaky the project ends and I keep the deposit. That safety net usually covers most of the problems. You would be amazed how much more focused people are when your holding their money. I sometimes use a basic contract, but nothing to scary.

Great producer/client relationships are built on trust and open communication. Also keep in mind that if they really did breach the contract, I for one would not have the resources or THE TIME to bring legal action against them. Its hard to work on other gigs if your busy suing your clients.
Production is vast and not well understood by the client. An intimidating contract could further cloud the issue and make them feel uneasy about the process.

I say find the middle ground were you are both protected, but both comfortable. You don't want buyers remorse before the camera even rolls.
 
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