disjecta
Lucky Duck
Re: Hudson Latest Outland Mov
Looks really cool John. Here's a couple of thoughts (oh no, here goes disjecta on one of his diatribes... )
1. The first element that flies in (the "L" and the "Pi") don't seem to resolve properly. They join the second element without continuity.
2. It feels sluggish to me. I would introduce the forground elements, the sun, and the background shape together and maybe quicken up the flare/sun on the horizon. When you start becoming aware of an effect, it's lost, do you know what I mean?
3. The 2 suns was a good point brought up in the post above. Is the bottom one representing a flare from the top sun?
Sorry to be nitpicky but I think it looks really good. The overall point is that it could be half as long and twice as effective.
Looks really cool John. Here's a couple of thoughts (oh no, here goes disjecta on one of his diatribes... )
1. The first element that flies in (the "L" and the "Pi") don't seem to resolve properly. They join the second element without continuity.
2. It feels sluggish to me. I would introduce the forground elements, the sun, and the background shape together and maybe quicken up the flare/sun on the horizon. When you start becoming aware of an effect, it's lost, do you know what I mean?
3. The 2 suns was a good point brought up in the post above. Is the bottom one representing a flare from the top sun?
Sorry to be nitpicky but I think it looks really good. The overall point is that it could be half as long and twice as effective.
