Hey

Re: Hey

One may find,
My poem prime.
When juxtaposed,
With Thartley's rhyme.

;) 28

(I had a better one for 27, but Disjecta posted while I was writing it and RUINED EVERYTHING!)
 
Re: Hey

Now you can modify your last post cause it's now number 27.

TC sent a post of hate
So I changed to 28 :D
 
Re: Hey

;D

Thanks Dis I appreciate the gesture.
Damn it I forgot my witty reply.

(That's in iambic pentameter, by the way.)
 
Re: Hey

Y'know, TC, I sweated over a hot stove all frickin' day to get you back to post #27 and now you tell me you forgot????!!!!
 
Re: Hey

I work hard all day long, and if at some point between getting yelled at by the boss, and being stuck in traffic I forget a poem, I EXPECT A LITTLE COURTESY.
 
Re: Hey

Okay fine. Maybe your boss wouldn't yell at you if you weren't writing poetry on DVXUser.... :P
 
Re: Hey

Well, I've racked my brain
For a rhyme with levity.
That last post
Was loaded with brevity.
TC, my friend,
You may want a divorce,
But its cheaper to keep 'er,
In the end, of course.
I dont know if this is
Thirty-five or thirty-four,
But I'm taking my leave,
And shall rhyme no more.

~T~
 
Re: Hey

Beautiful. I don't think any of us can top that. Thartley wins the thread!
 
Re: Hey

Is all this stuff copyrighted or can I use this thread in a script of mine....I love the way it evolves..... do let me know
 
Re: Hey

Your more than welcome to any of my comments. So long as I get a credit. ;)
 
Re: Hey

That I promise, and when I win my oscar for it...I shall go up on stage and thank DVX user. with special mention to thartley, tc and disjecta.
 
You must log in or register to reply here.
Back
Top