ChrisHurn
Well-known member
Hey everyone.
I am working on my first original short film script that's over a few pages in length and I could really use some help from a few people, just to read it over so far, give thoughts, feedback, suggestions, etc. Right now I'm 3/4 way the 2nd draft, and I'm kind of stuck.
The film is about a group of teenagers, their first experience with camping, the freedom that goes with it, and what happens when someone goes missing. It's a short drama (so far 20 pages)
I know where I want to go with the characters but I can't quite seem to put the pieces together at the end, I would really appreciate being able to send the script to a few keen people here. Anyone?
Cheers!
Chris
I am working on my first original short film script that's over a few pages in length and I could really use some help from a few people, just to read it over so far, give thoughts, feedback, suggestions, etc. Right now I'm 3/4 way the 2nd draft, and I'm kind of stuck.
The film is about a group of teenagers, their first experience with camping, the freedom that goes with it, and what happens when someone goes missing. It's a short drama (so far 20 pages)
I know where I want to go with the characters but I can't quite seem to put the pieces together at the end, I would really appreciate being able to send the script to a few keen people here. Anyone?
Cheers!
Chris