Fresh set of eyes on a short script

[Gohanto]

Hello,

I've got a 10 page fantasy/thriller I've been working on for a while. I'm happy with the story but I've been retooling the structure again and again. I think it works now but I'm looking for a couple people to read through it with a fresh set of eyes for any suggestions.

Thanks.

 

[ConspiracyPenguin]

I can probably take a look later in the week if you want to throw it at me, but I can't make any promises.

 

[STYLZ]

I will read it.

 

[RallyMonkey]

I would love to take a look at it.

 

[Russell Moore]

I'd be happy to read it.

 

[JT Ryder]

I'd like to read it...PM me.

-JT

 

[STYLZ]

Just so you know I got your e-mail and will be reading it within next couple days.