ianfreeze
Member
i wrote a script, im looking to get some feedback on it. how to make it funnier and tigher. its only 6 pages. i posted it in the screenwriting section but that place barely has a pulse. ive been watching allot of the stuf fyou guys have posted and it looks badass.
if my reasons for posting it here are not good enough, just delete the thread (im not sure who the mod is) theres no point in it getting moved to screenwriting cause its already there. if anyone has any feedack that would be awesome.
also, let me preface that by saying that there probablly are typos in it, and i apologize for them. im not a writer, nor will i ever be, i just want to make something and all the guys i know who write are busy with school or lazy. the script is for my personal use so the fact that its not a perfect example of how a script should be written doesnt matter. im interested in the content. thanks for any help you can offer. i appreciate it.
-daniel out
if my reasons for posting it here are not good enough, just delete the thread (im not sure who the mod is) theres no point in it getting moved to screenwriting cause its already there. if anyone has any feedack that would be awesome.
also, let me preface that by saying that there probablly are typos in it, and i apologize for them. im not a writer, nor will i ever be, i just want to make something and all the guys i know who write are busy with school or lazy. the script is for my personal use so the fact that its not a perfect example of how a script should be written doesnt matter. im interested in the content. thanks for any help you can offer. i appreciate it.
-daniel out
