first time Softbox

Seemed fine to me. If you're asking for an opinion, it indicates you may not be pleased or are not sure if you should be pleased. The main thing is to be sure about what you want and then objectively look at it afterwards and see if it comes up to that standard. You can always find someone that doesn't like the way you did something but the key will be do most people appreciate it or not.
 
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