First Attempt

[stinkpot]

This is my first attempt at product photography. Shot with the Pentax *IstDL (entry level SLR) and an old 50mm Ashi lens f2.8. Something about this photo bugs me. Any feedback would be appreciated. Thanks.

 

[Bus No. 8]

Well, that food looks revolting, for one. What is that with the catsup drizzled all over it? Other than that, nice photo.

 

[LazerLordz]

I think there's a glass that's half-hidden on the left..it seems quite distracting..

Are you focusing on the food, the glass of stout or the menu? I think you might want to center your positioning or focus on lesser items in this particular layout.

 

[smithy]

Putting you product right smack in the middle doesn't do much in creativity..do the rule of thirds to help you create a more interesting pix. Also you can see your reflection in the glass and the reflection off the table doesn't help much.

 

[stinkpot]

Well, that food looks revolting, for one...

That's hilarious! It does look horrible!

I shot one without the glass in the background and it bugged me ever more... I was going for a still-life composition and not a single product focus but I agree that the beer is too centered. The reflection in the glass does have to go.

Thanks all, that is helpful stuff. :beer: