Finally, I make a film!!

[philip bloom]

It's basically a two header, very powerful. Co-written and directed by Joe Shaw.

Read all about it on my blog at www.philipbloom.net

I really loved it and hope to do more in the future.

 

[cordvision]

Hey,
It looked very good, congratulation!
A few suggestions:
On the story: I couldn't finish watching the whole piece yet (stuck for the 2nd time after it downloaded 75 percent). So far, I felt it was predictable. (It's a stereotype of a priest)
Editing: You cut a few times back (during the dialog) to the master shot. I had the feeling that this takes away too much from the tension. I would stay close... just my two cents...

 

[philip bloom]

cheers. weird that it got stuck. tested it again and it has worked fined.

it's not predictable when you get to the end.

 

[robmneilson]

it looks great, especially that slow dolly at the end...but I do agree keep it close. I love the bokeh and the wide shots take me out of the drama.

 

[kss212]

i loved it

the shots were beautiful

especially the second shot...the long walkway looks great

 

[philip bloom]

thanks...i loved the location. The deserted platform added so much

 

[Moojangles]

nice little film, i liked the colouring a lot. The location definitely made the film. What mics did you use for that clip? You mentioned the boom audio was not included yet.

 

[Andrew Brinkhaus]

Yeah, great work. I read it was one of your first narrative pieces, congrats on the project. It had a great sense of texture to it, and great color grading as well.

 

[cinebuddy]

Well done, I loved the blocking you guys did from the walk to over the shoulder shot. Love that EX LEX combo.

 

[tmnt]

That was really nice, the color grading was fantastic. The actors, particularly the young guy were very, very good. Really impressed by the LEX - thought I was watching SGpro.