Finally got my site up.

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mmiller884

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Finally i've gotten around to finishing a website. The sole purpose of the site is to show my portfolio, but i did also but services on there. Check out of the video's and let me know what you guys think. Thanks

www.mattmillermedia.com
 
Nicely done!
Get rid of all the "COMING SOONS!"

Also is this text skewed?
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Not bad. You might want to move the words "video.graphic.web" or change the colour so they will pop more...Also, space the type a bit...you have the room.
 
I like it, simple and interesting. Course, like jstunzi said. The coming soons.. =]

Nice work man.
 
I would just change one thing, the main Miller Media logo, everything Else looks top notch, good job.
 
Echo what others say on the clean look. Very well done. :beer:

Some copy feedback:
You have
"Through creative design, thought and hard work, Miller Media has been able to help companies turn their goals into realities. Whether it is video production, graphic design or web design, our team of creative designers are here to help you! Check back periodically for site updates."

I would change it to:
"Through creative design, thought and hard work, Miller Media turns companies' goals into realities." Much more impact. "has been able to help" is unecessarily wordy and weakens the sentence.

Even better IMHO:
"Through creative design, thought and hard work, Miller Media turns our clients' goals into realities." "Companies" sounds impersonal, "our clients" sounds both more personal and more professional to me.

On the contact page, I'd drop the exclamation point after email me (too eager maybe). A colon after "please let me know the following" would be better as well.
 
Very nice.

I agree that the Miller Media logo looks a bit out of place with the rest of the site. The glow may be one of the main problems. Also try using the same font. My design teacher always emphasizes type as one of the most important factor for layouts. Try to not deviate in the fonts. Make sure to not use more than two types of fonts in a layout, and make sure they work well together. If you want something different, work with sizes, the kerning (space between each character), and the weight of the font.
 
Did you design the page and if you did, which software did you use?

Or did you use a template provided by your hosting company?

Looks good.
 
Just from a bandwidth note, if you have some good deal set up thats fine, since you seem to have a lot of videos, these will eat up a lot of bandwidth,

one suggestion is that you can use free video hosts like *shudder* youtube et al, and embed it into your website, of course you may lose alot of quality (but some tutorials exist about using optimal compression settings in order to get great results)

my 2 pence
 
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