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[Loki]

if anyone is interested in reading the script I wrote last night.. I would love feedback.

things to note... I wrote it in under 4 hours.. it was written during the wee hours of the night. And there are many spelling mistakes through out I think.

anywho lemme know what you think...

http://dreamsoftfilms.dunderbug.com/script.pdf

PS: i don't think it is particularly all that good.. but I don't ever really like any of my work.

 

[disjecta]

Re: feedback

Hey Loki,

Why don't you put this in the Screenwriting section of this forum...

 

[Loki]

Re: feedback

hmmm... that is a damn smart Idea..

I completely forgot that there was a forum for that.

off I go to post there... or maybe a mod could just move this sucker...

 

[Isaac_Brody]

Re: feedback

It's generally good to make sure your piece is free of spelling errors before sending it out. There may be other errors too which might affect the flow of the reader.