Feedback on my Site

Eh... looks alright. The gallery page never loaded, just said "please wait...", and it seemed to take awhile for the home page to load. It should load quickly, as there's not a lot going on...

Looks like your typical, basic website. For me, it didn't strike me as unique in any way, or, to be perfectly honest, professional.

-brown
 
either hire a copy editor or ask one of your friends who is a tight writer to comb through your website. the overall look is quite professional, but the copy on your site is not up to par with the rest of what is presented. may sound trivial, but your website is your marketing piece and every word and every punctuation counts. there are misspellings, too. a good editor is extremely detail oriented....

in the video and gallery..why do we see the copy/descriptions, first, anyways? the work should be able to stand on its own, really. in other words, if the video is good, you won't even need to write much, anyways!

what is the bottom line of white blocks for? maybe you could lose that. I went over there thinking there were some hyperlinks.

good start. you will be on your way to having your website help you do some good marketing. just clean up a few things.
 
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